My guest is a man with an impressive background and resume.
He also has serious thoughts about writing and is sharing some of them with us
today.
Shelly Frome is a member of Mystery Writers of America, a
professor of dramatic arts emeritus at the University of Connecticut, a former
professional actor, a writer of mysteries, books on theater and film, and
articles on the performing arts appearing in a number of periodicals in
theU.S.and the U.K.He is also a film critic and a contributor to writers’ blogs.
His fiction includes Lilac Moon, Sun Dance for Andy Horn, Tinseltown Riff and
the trans-Atlantic cozy The Twinning
Murders. Among his works of non-fiction are the acclaimed The Actors Studio and texts on the art
and craft of screenwriting and writing for the stage. Twilight of the Drifter,
his latest novel, is a southern gothic crime-and-blues odyssey.
Making a Case for
the Slow Simmering Process
by Shelly Frome
Judging
from the daily posts e-mailed via countless writers’ sites, the watchword is
that writing fiction is just a casual pursuit among kindred spirits: Here’s a
sample:
“Hey,
everybody, how do you mine your ideas?” “On average, how many plot twists do
you need?” “Is it okay to do a stand-alone or should you have a sequel or two
up your sleeve?” “What’s trending in paranormal romance?”
And here
are some friendly tips on offer:
“Try these
power words that add punch.” “Try on different hats--writing for two or more
age groups at a time.” “Taking it seriously without having to take it seriously.”
“Find your readers with this fun site.”
At first
glance, though Writer’s Digest has a huge circulation, it seems the easy
writers must have skipped over an article in the current issue featuring Andre
Dubus III, the bestselling author of House
of Sand and Fog. This son of a literary icon declares that “the story has
to percolate in your mind for a long time. There’s a profound difference
between just making something up and letting it fall into your psyche and
imagination rather than pushing it out. Doing the real work first and then
painstakingly crafting the words.”
Of course this is the same magazine
that plays both ends against the middle. The same magazine that shouts “Readers
of fiction are faced with saturated genres and a limited amount of time and
money. Any title has to immediately grab their attention. The market doesn’t
lie.”
In one previous issue, someone
calling herself a literary change agent seemed to echo this selfsame outlook.
So no wonder. If the denizens of the net read this magazine at all, here is a
woman who claims that reaching readers is a matter of blanketing social media,
blogging anywhere and everywhere, and “passing out fliers on street corners.”
To meet these demands, contributors
billed as successful pros offered sure-fire tips like these:
“Use plotting strategies that make
the book a winner. Give readers a hook at the get-go. And be sure to leave them
with a take-home thought.” “Make them laugh and cry. When readers laugh and cry
they’ll get that emotional high they’re looking for along with that walloping
payoff.” “Before you start, come up with a logline that makes buyers sit up and
say ‘gotta read it’.” “Try this for a ploy. Redesign an old hit TV show for the
texting, tweeting, Lady Gaga generation. It’s a great reminder how important it
is to always have your readers in mind.”
Having just
returned from a major conference in Portland, Oregon, with its 800 attendees, I
have to admit the attitude wasn’t that much different. The focus was on
generating a marketable product rather than on creative development. Being a
paid professional rather than going through all that labor or, in F. Scott
Fitzgerald’s terms, being a true novelist with a peasant’s soul.
Admittedly,
every time I happened to mention some literary icon like, say, Eudora Welty, no
one had the foggiest idea who I was talking about.
So, even
though I may be fighting an uphill battle, let’s at lest consider Ms.Welty’s
approach as an option. Take the time when Willie Morris (another writer some of
you also may have never heard of) was a youngster and his mother introduced him
to Eudora Welty in Jackson, Mississippi. “Willie, this is Ms. Welty who writes
books her own self.” What his mother meant was, this lady wrote from the inside
out. Using her imagination she first made sure she had a story to tell and knew
exactly what was in her characters’ hearts at all times. In that way she never
wrote anything that didn’t spring naturally to mind. Welty’s way of working
also required a firm sense of time and place. “It tells me the important
things. Steers me and keeps me going straight. It’s a definer and confiner of
what I’m doing.”
In short,
Eudora Welty allowed each creation to take it’s time falling deep into her
psyche and never once pushed anything out.
Moving on, we can take into account
what Harper Lee had to go through spending over a year transforming her tales
about her Depression-era small-town in Alabamainto the full-fledged To Kill a Mockingbird. By her own
admission, she couldn’t have done it without the prompting and abiding
encouragement of her New York editor. In every case, something meaningful seems
to spring from the same kind of sensibility and work ethic. More recently,
there’s the example of Sue Monk Kidd’s The
Secret Life of Bees, with its neglected 14-year-old girl, isolated on a
South Carolinapeach farm, a mysterious crime hanging over the narrative, a
search for a long lost mother and a hovering image of a Black Madonna.
If you want
to, you can find literary threads anywhere and everywhere. You can trace Edgar
Alan Poe’s inauguration of the detective novel down to yesterday and today’s
P.I.s who take us inside the sun-drenched mansions of Beverly Hills and down
the mean streets to reveal something extraordinary. And that includes James Lee
Burke from the banks of Bayou Teche and Iberia Parish as he captivates readers
with his vivid descriptions, crackling dialogue and sudden acts of violence. At
the same time, he holds the record for rejections (111). Undaunted, he kept at
it and at it till that particular work found a readership.
The stories
can be as light as Agatha Christie’s cozies, but underneath it all was a lot of
research and a great concern over making the world right. The stories can be as
fanciful as Ray Bradbury’s science fiction taking us to other realms, with his
own universal concerns and work ethic as he strived to make the extraordinary
human. You can switch to Steven King, a disciple of Bradbury whose fascination
with what’s lurking beyond the veil of the ordinary causes him to put in at
least four to six hour days.
You can get far more serious and
turn to Reynolds Price’s novels set in his native North Carolina. His tales
tell us life is all about getting through time and what time does to you. How
to endure when, bit by bit, parts of your freedom have been bartered away. All
this dovetailing with the complications of sexuality, white racism and
loneliness within the backdrop of his region and its history. Needless to say,
a lot went into this before it was even close to seeing the light of day.
I know what you’re thinking. What
about something a lot more in-between? What about somebody like John Grisham. A
guy who knows that readers have an insatiable appetite for stories about
lawyers and scandals. A guy who says novels that don’t work use too many words.
The generator is your big idea. To locate it, you steal something. “Everything
is fair game. We all steal, that’s what we do.”
Then you
narrow it down to a half-dozen one-sentence pitches and run them by someone.
Like his wife who never fails to pick the one with the best hook.
Granted it’s something to think
about. Granted also, he put in a lot of work painstakingly honing his craft bit
by bit, day by day, month by month. As if tossing it around and telling anyone
what he was up to would cause his muse to flit away and leave him empty and
bereft.
All told, I
guess it comes down to the simple words uttered by Marlon Brando in Bud
Schulberg’s On The Waterfront. “There’s
more to this, Charlie. A lot more to this than meets the eye.”
Shelly, I love the way you think. Thank your for such a thoughtful and insightful post.
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