tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6404036170106001374.post1312920245881745425..comments2024-03-18T04:40:38.214-05:00Comments on Murderous Musings: ‘Welcome,’ he adumbrated lubriciouslyChester Campbellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07155257451021065218noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6404036170106001374.post-47968486456111853832013-03-31T06:35:51.636-05:002013-03-31T06:35:51.636-05:00Thanks Mary and Mark. I don't think enough peo...Thanks Mary and Mark. I don't think enough people recognise the importance of rhythm in prose. My first two bits of advice for new writers are:<br />1. Trust your own voice.<br />2. When editing, read your copy aloud. Bill Kirtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07675643113010061969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6404036170106001374.post-39556282453518886792013-03-30T15:03:54.316-05:002013-03-30T15:03:54.316-05:00"Great post," said Mark. :)"Great post," said Mark. :)Mark W. Danielsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05127689413680147200noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6404036170106001374.post-24135667544788497602013-03-30T10:46:33.938-05:002013-03-30T10:46:33.938-05:00I totally agree with what you wrote here, Bill, es...I totally agree with what you wrote here, Bill, especially the "Bill said" or "said Bill" part. I much prefer 'said' placed before the name in dialogue. It just sounds better.Mary Welkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04399857531758579896noreply@blogger.com